SATNAC Submission

I submitted my work in progress paper to SATNAC and I am pretty happy. I have been told that part of the exercise in writing a work in progress paper is to get practice in academic writing. I think I am growing from the experience but I am certain I don’t like red writing. I haven’t really verbalised this to Alf but for some reason he seems to have figured this out. All my feedback unlike with the proposal was in GREEN. I hope it wasn’t a case of him not having a red pen, but if it is (and hopeful he might read this) green is the way to go for aspiring tree huggers like myself.